Framing Statement: The peer review that I decided to post is a rough draft essay from our 3rd paper of the year. The third paper was one that I felt the most confident about writing and peer review. I helped my peer structure her quotes to give them a better lead-in to make her quotes as powerful as they can be. She had really good quotes without any lead in or context. My peer also did not introduce people before quoting them, this can lead to reader confusion, so I made sure to comment on this. Besides quote structure, I also helped her grammatical errors and organization. In peer reviewing, I am good at working with quotes. Leading in and explaining quotes is something I have learned to do well. I do need to work on getting my point across clearer though, when I learn how to do it better I can help others do the same. I left a lot of positive feedback on her essay, as she had a solid thesis. All in all, my peer had a really captivating essay.
