I am very happy with the progression of my third paper, but I believe I have still more to go. This paper should be “engaging in the conversation” of literacy acquisition. I should be adding more of Williams and Brant besides just Alexander. I am very confident in Alexander in my essay, I always root back to her when talking about the literacy Discourse, but now it is time to expand my essay to Brant and Williams. I have good introductions to the subjects and concepts I am talking about. Cultural narratives are clearly explained and given examples of. As mentioned before, I just need to introduce Williams and Brant in my essay and talk about their role in literacy acquisition. To make this essay complete I need to dig deeper into the role of sponsorship and a healthy relationship between sponsor and cultural narrative. What effect does a sponsor have on a victim narrative? Why are sponsors important? These are questions I need to answer in order to make my essay complete. I am on a right track, but there is always room for improvement, and I am happy with how the essay is coming along.
Fish are friends not food
